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From Me To Me
You filthy fucking being
You say you’re sick, even unlovable
But I see through the bullshit
You’d fuck me over for your own benefits, you fucking
CUNT!
Your motives, sickening, even unbearable
Righteous people are easily persuaded
By the whispers of misguidedness
I’d fucking kill myself if it weren’t for you
The hatred, a catalyst to your demise
Can’t you see the bloody tears in my misguided eyes
Filth and hatred have no discression
You say you’re sick, even unlovable
But I see through the bullshit
You’d fuck me over for your own benefits, you fucking
CUNT!
Your motives, sickening, even unbearable
Righteous people are easily persuaded
By the whispers of misguidedness
I’d fucking kill myself if it weren’t for you
The hatred, a catalyst to your demise
Can’t you see the bloody tears in my misguided eyes
Filth and hatred have no discression
Published 10th Feb 2016
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10th Feb 2016 4:00am
First off I'm just going to say I hope you're alright....with that said the way you were able to capture so much pure, raw emotion in 14 lines or so, while maintaining an even, coherent flow is really impressive.
Keep up the writing, cheers Pho3nix19xx
Keep up the writing, cheers Pho3nix19xx
10th Feb 2016 4:31am
I am doing just fine! :) As far as I remember, I was drunk and hanging with some friends at their house and all of the sudden I got pissed. I walked into another room, sat down, and wrote this in about 3 minutes. I can't consider myself a poet, because I don't try to make everything flow, rhyme, or even make sense most of the time, but this is me and it really makes my day to see that someone somewhat admires it!
