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Moon Book
He was like a good book
hard to put down
his word's still warm
She was the blue moon
bending near him
drenching his pages
hard to put down
his word's still warm
She was the blue moon
bending near him
drenching his pages
Published 28th Jan 2016
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28th Jan 2016 6:00am
I like the link here with the connection of the sense of sight and it's importance in treasuring the moon and a book
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28th Jan 2016 7:33pm
Tommie, thanks for letting me be the cow (well bull) jumping over this beautiful scene! Brava!
31st Jan 2016 6:48pm
31st Jan 2016 9:56am
I have said it previously - Tommie your sensuality is consummate, your word play divine and intimates beautiful and sincere erotica. Please bind and publish these.
31st Jan 2016 6:51pm
Franko,
You're too kind! It's a dream of mine, one day
to have my word's in a book! I truly appreciate your comment! Thank you 😊
You're too kind! It's a dream of mine, one day
to have my word's in a book! I truly appreciate your comment! Thank you 😊
