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pity
You know what you did, but you still dont care.You act all bad in front of your friends, but we both know what you do. You hide the pity but you feel the shame. You know what should be done but you wont. What a pity...
Published 27th Jun 2011
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27th Jun 2011 7:48pm
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2011 8:55am
I have read a lot of your work. I feel you have a great talent! It sure does need refinement though...If you like poetry about the darkside, and heartache, you may find my work rather inviting...and it may give you some inspiration as well...
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