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Chick Flick......
“....talk dirty to me, baby, without talking at all “
she spoke of
dreams that ignite my
metaphysicality,
unscripted reality
“spoken in tongues”
no written dialogue
or fake lines to be run
…..mmmm, let me and he be part of your production
no soundtrack necessary
no musical score
just an overlay
of warm, moist
lips kissing the
head of blissfulness,
nothing more......
“....let the Rain fall down on me”
broad, brilliant strokes
deeply "poetic love"
stirring her “butter churn”
Icing upon her red velvet cake
damn, “Alabama Shakes” !!!!
an über erotic recipe,
a tasty Goetz caramel medley
3 parts
Lamont, Dymond and Lady “V”
warm water spring,
pyridine
squalene
a dash of my favorite libation,
glistening.....
a jigger of
fructose and flavin sweetens the taste
proteins and vitamins
to moisturize her angelic body and face
galactose, mucous,
not as nasty as it sounds
“...my milkshake is better than yours”
cool, thick and smooth going......down
you and I naked,
projected all across the big screen
so damned wild and vivid
lewdly delicious
decadent and obscene....
......down on my knees
licking her frothy vulva
cappuccino heaven,
tongue parting her wet lips
"face-riding" me like no other lover.......
…the reverberation
of rich, wet sex sounds
and a panoramic view
it's all that's needed
my cock dances to the rhythm of her
brazen hips
her bee-stung lips whisper “somebody please fuck me....”
“….four letter words and three wishes
Is what I came for
Love birds blowin' kisses in picture-frame form
just a fraction of this major attraction, cuming soon
I bust and implode
I keep blazin'; it's so amazin'
The occasion that I am raisin',
massive body invasion
So what you savin' all that love for?
Open up your mind, explore,
make it hardcore
I'll be your candy store
Give you just a little more than what you bargained for
And if you ask me for some guidance,
it's not a minus
I'll break it down to a science,
kitchen appliance
Sixty-nine, gimme mine; I'll be your valentine
365 days I want my sun to shine
See, I've been waiting for the planets to realign
Total eclipse on my lips until the end of time.......
…....Gimme some “
[font=Times New Roman]( divine inspiration granted to me by Toni Braxton's "Speaking in Tongues", "Gimme Some" and Rain's "Tease" )
Published 26th Jan 2016
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26th Jan 2016 9:52pm
The secret codes are not so secret to some...
And thank you for elevating that, never cheapening the connection to feminine divinity.
And thank you for elevating that, never cheapening the connection to feminine divinity.
This is colorfully sexy, Archie! :) Really a great read that's visually entertaining. Such a strong desire to this ink. I just had an omg moment from your song references. I've always been a fan of Toni Braxton (girl-crush), but after watching her life-story a few days ago, I had my son download her first album, to reminisce. What’s mind-boggling to me is….I’m listening to 'Unbreak My Heart'-acapella, this very moment, while reading your poem. Crazy huh?! Out of millions of artists....
27th Jan 2016 5:54am
Elegant and articulate.metaphysicality must bring this so courteous pen of yours the pride & stirring of heavy-diamond women's appreciation &philandering.you must try forthcoming more erogenous goosing the deeper-lurking crazy enough about the carnal femi9 empowerable. Good luck.Ali.
27th Jan 2016 8:25am
…the reverberation
of rich, wet sex sounds
and a panoramic view
it's all that's needed
my cock dances to the rhythm of her
brazen hips
her bee-stung lips whisper “somebody please fuck me....”
Fantastic.
of rich, wet sex sounds
and a panoramic view
it's all that's needed
my cock dances to the rhythm of her
brazen hips
her bee-stung lips whisper “somebody please fuck me....”
Fantastic.
27th Jan 2016 3:49pm
Must agree entirely with Jittrbug above, on both the particular section and it's fantastical nature.
Beautifully done.
FP
Beautifully done.
FP
