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Not Truly Seen
As she looks into the mirror
she sees, she sees how others see her,
golden eyes, plump lips, long soft black hair.
Beautiful, they say.
They don't see the ugliness,
they don't see the uncleaness within,
they don't see the real her.
Hideous, ugly, souless,
Hated by herself, loved by all..
she sees, she sees how others see her,
golden eyes, plump lips, long soft black hair.
Beautiful, they say.
They don't see the ugliness,
they don't see the uncleaness within,
they don't see the real her.
Hideous, ugly, souless,
Hated by herself, loved by all..
Published 26th Jun 2011
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27th Jun 2011 00:02am
It always feels like you're the only one who feels the way you do. Who thinks and sees things the way you do. So alone and hopeless...and then you see something like this and it shakes you because you're not alone.
All of your poems have that effect on me. I feel less alone.
Not too mention they have a rawness to them that I find mesmerizing and quite beautiful.
All of your poems have that effect on me. I feel less alone.
Not too mention they have a rawness to them that I find mesmerizing and quite beautiful.
27th Jun 2011 00:06am
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