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Take it back
I take it all back
the i love you's
and kisses
the hugs and my love
our soft spoken wishes.
You've killed me inside
and pulled the trigger
im lying a a cooling pool
of hate and despair
some wandering soul's dinner
the i love you's
and kisses
the hugs and my love
our soft spoken wishes.
You've killed me inside
and pulled the trigger
im lying a a cooling pool
of hate and despair
some wandering soul's dinner
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Who?
26th Jun 2011 1:33am
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26th Jun 2011 1:34am
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2011 3:04am
Who is it about? everything ok?
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26th Jun 2011 3:17am
yes guys everything is fine,it was about a friend i hate a fught with almost a week ago. We had a fight about love,its fine now i just lost another good friend is alll :(
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30th Aug 2011 7:44pm
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30th Aug 2011 7:46pm
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30th Aug 2011 7:48pm
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30th Aug 2011 7:50pm
ya she pissed me off. ha i dont even remember why we fought and broke up (you and me)
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30th Aug 2011 7:52pm
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30th Aug 2011 7:54pm
as do i :/ BUT! i haz a gf who i fight wif constantly and ur preggo and live a few states away soooooo i loves you!
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30th Aug 2011 7:54pm
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30th Aug 2011 7:58pm
hahahaha as will I! i hope im still the godfather :( that actually made me somewhat happy,that and calling you mine for the short time we wer together. My gf tries hard to but i dont really let anybody in ._.
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30th Aug 2011 8:00pm
Of course<3
And trust me that made me happy too :]
And why dont you.?
And i remember what happened between us now. .
And trust me that made me happy too :]
And why dont you.?
And i remember what happened between us now. .
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30th Aug 2011 8:04pm
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30th Aug 2011 8:09pm