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Motionless
I lay motionless
in this prison
Who knew my
life would end
No one in the world
but I would
Because I was the
one who planned it
It was actually
really simple
Jumping from high up
and it was lethal
So here I stand
And here I lay
Spritually out side
and body in my grave
I thought I'd be
gone by now
But here I am left
to stay somehow
This must be
my punishment
For trying to escape
a life's curse
in this prison
Who knew my
life would end
No one in the world
but I would
Because I was the
one who planned it
It was actually
really simple
Jumping from high up
and it was lethal
So here I stand
And here I lay
Spritually out side
and body in my grave
I thought I'd be
gone by now
But here I am left
to stay somehow
This must be
my punishment
For trying to escape
a life's curse
Published 24th Jun 2011
| Edited 14th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 8:31pm
The first line contains a spelling mistake with the word 'moitionless' which I believe should be motionless?
There's a lot of desperate language in here which matches the title very well. It sounds like you are asking yourself a lot of big questions. I hope that you find the peace you deserve in your life.
Thank you for the read.
There's a lot of desperate language in here which matches the title very well. It sounds like you are asking yourself a lot of big questions. I hope that you find the peace you deserve in your life.
Thank you for the read.
