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A Winter Tilling
Camelia and Hydrangea bloom white.
They brighten the midwinter gloom a tad,
But, like a mound of snowdrops, don’t excite
More than a passing comment. Just be glad
I led you to these uninspiring plants,
And had you strip your nice warm gown: silks pool
Around your feet – as do your bra and pants -
So naked, like a leafless branch. The rule
That you obey me always will remain
In place and you can thank me, for the thrill
Of cold sleet striking, later. Icy rain
Will make you gasp and open up; I’ll till
The warmth your mouth offers: pleasingly tight
While Winter vegetation still blooms white.
They brighten the midwinter gloom a tad,
But, like a mound of snowdrops, don’t excite
More than a passing comment. Just be glad
I led you to these uninspiring plants,
And had you strip your nice warm gown: silks pool
Around your feet – as do your bra and pants -
So naked, like a leafless branch. The rule
That you obey me always will remain
In place and you can thank me, for the thrill
Of cold sleet striking, later. Icy rain
Will make you gasp and open up; I’ll till
The warmth your mouth offers: pleasingly tight
While Winter vegetation still blooms white.
Published 31st Dec 2015
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Oh sweetheart..how lovely sensual..
This cold here made quite warm..
Do the hydrangea bloom in winter there?
Im a nerd..lol sorry..
More than a passing comment. Just be glad
I led you to these uninspiring plants,
And had you strip your nice warm gown: silks pool
Silks pool..yess Oblivion..
I could have taken it broken up better visually..and think it would have read even nicer than it did..but that is just my OCD nature..
Third piece to day ive read that made me wish my RL had room..must clean it out..
A treasure..will be reading more very soon..
Never mind..it went on..huh..well there we are! Lol..great ink
Love
Jen
This cold here made quite warm..
Do the hydrangea bloom in winter there?
Im a nerd..lol sorry..
More than a passing comment. Just be glad
I led you to these uninspiring plants,
And had you strip your nice warm gown: silks pool
Silks pool..yess Oblivion..
I could have taken it broken up better visually..and think it would have read even nicer than it did..but that is just my OCD nature..
Third piece to day ive read that made me wish my RL had room..must clean it out..
A treasure..will be reading more very soon..
Never mind..it went on..huh..well there we are! Lol..great ink
Love
Jen
1st Jan 2016 11:37am
they survived the mild winter - glad you found something in the resultant verses - thanks for taking the time to comment. s.o.
