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I can't
I can't feel your insults,
I can't feel the pain.
The only way I know I'm real is I see my own blood stain.
I can't hear the compliments,
I can't hear the lies.
Every word that I speak is to my own demise.
I can't see the love,
I can't see the real me.
Death should come and welcome me, take my heart, and set it free
I can't feel the pain.
The only way I know I'm real is I see my own blood stain.
I can't hear the compliments,
I can't hear the lies.
Every word that I speak is to my own demise.
I can't see the love,
I can't see the real me.
Death should come and welcome me, take my heart, and set it free
Published 23rd Jun 2011
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3rd Apr 2012 4:41pm
I like repitition and you really used alot of it.. you also used alot of punctuation, which I **adore**, so I'm digging this.. Just, cutting is a serious thing. Know that.
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- Edited 14th Oct 2019 3:45am
18th Apr 2012 10:38pm
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