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Rum

I sit here still laughing the night away as she burns my insides,
Cheap , only eight dollars for her to stay for a day or more ,
Oh darling take it all away from me the thoughts of yesterday,
Love,a cruel feeling I get too hard and fast tho she makes it seem alright when with me,
Her smooth curves feel like wonder in my hand as I pour her down ,
My heart ,head and body scream for just one more shot so as to feel a complete loss of control.
Only if she loved me back and wouldn't leave me as soon as she does everytime leaving me crying , thirsty alone with my thoughts as she does but that's her way the curse of many men ,
Only wishing to fall back drunk once more.
Written by Cannibal_Cain
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