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Leaves' love / Loves leave
Leaves
Were Sere
Red and gold
Winter Had come
Stealing love softly
From my arms Flying off
Leaving a cold place behind
Empty but for Winter's onslaught
Stricken trees' kaleidescope
Wafting off Dancing past
Taking heart's desire
With ease Eager
Soft and swift
Cold Still
Leaves
Were Sere
Red and gold
Winter Had come
Stealing love softly
From my arms Flying off
Leaving a cold place behind
Empty but for Winter's onslaught
Stricken trees' kaleidescope
Wafting off Dancing past
Taking heart's desire
With ease Eager
Soft and swift
Cold Still
Leaves
Published 16th Jun 2011
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16th Jun 2011 8:58pm
You can't beat a bit of good old fashioned concrete poetry. I like how you have a couple of poems in one.
Good imagery. I don't really have any criticisms except maybe the capitalization you've got going on, but I can understand that might be for a purpose.
A+ for creativity!
Good imagery. I don't really have any criticisms except maybe the capitalization you've got going on, but I can understand that might be for a purpose.
A+ for creativity!
16th Jun 2011 9:21pm
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