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Ok
She ask if I'm ok
Wants to know if I'm not gonna flip
Says I look pissed
Are you ok
Fine
You sure
Yes I'm sure I, fine
An hr later
You yiu like yiu gonna kill someone
Are you ok
Yup I'm fine
I understand she cares
But I hate that question
Bc she knows the real answer
But she think my minds going to chance
You really want to know
No I'm not ok
But I won't tell yiu that
Wants to know if I'm not gonna flip
Says I look pissed
Are you ok
Fine
You sure
Yes I'm sure I, fine
An hr later
You yiu like yiu gonna kill someone
Are you ok
Yup I'm fine
I understand she cares
But I hate that question
Bc she knows the real answer
But she think my minds going to chance
You really want to know
No I'm not ok
But I won't tell yiu that
Published 1st Nov 2015
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3rd Nov 2015 7:43pm
Sometimes people are not satisfied with the answers. Sometimes we ask cause we already know the answer, we just want to test the waters of trust. Other times, we just don't know or afraid to ask the right question. I relate to this, Brit. I think a lot of people do. I like how you brought the frustration of these kinds of moments out.
