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Nights sleep
Pins and needles
Just rip them out
I'm laying here lifeless
No worry or doubt
I've finally slipped
Into my abyss
An eternity of relief
An endless nights sleep
Published 21st Sep 2015
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Nice work! I really like your imagery, especially the part about how the "abyss" seems to be bittersweet for you. Also, welcome to DUP!
--Lissie
25th Sep 2015 4:56pm
