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Je pense que je t'aime!
Je vous le demande,
Qu'est-ce que vous penez de moi?,
Aimez-vous ou me déteste?
Je demande parce que je crois que je sues tombé en amour avec toi,
Vous dites que je suis belle et mignonne,
Vous êtes tellement plus beau qui moi,
Le miel est-il possible de vous encore rencontré?
Je pense que je t'aime!
Qu'est-ce que vous penez de moi?,
Aimez-vous ou me déteste?
Je demande parce que je crois que je sues tombé en amour avec toi,
Vous dites que je suis belle et mignonne,
Vous êtes tellement plus beau qui moi,
Le miel est-il possible de vous encore rencontré?
Je pense que je t'aime!
Published 8th Jun 2011
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8th Jun 2011 1:00am
I'm very far from fluent in French...very, but it looks pretty cheesy stuff to me.
Since I don't know about the author, I'll reserve judgment as to why she chose to write in French.
Since I don't know about the author, I'll reserve judgment as to why she chose to write in French.
8th Jun 2011 1:02am
I wrote in French because it was my first language, and I know that I messed up in it
8th Jun 2011 1:05am
8th Jun 2011 1:06am
I'm sure we have some fluent French speakers here who could give the poem a better critique, but as soon as you start running it through online translators then you might as well not bother reading it at all.
That's not a criticism of you, I'm just saying that many people won't even be able to read this, let alone understand it, and online translators will simply bastardize it. Doesn't mean you shouldn't write it of course.
That's not a criticism of you, I'm just saying that many people won't even be able to read this, let alone understand it, and online translators will simply bastardize it. Doesn't mean you shouldn't write it of course.
8th Jun 2011 1:11am
8th Jun 2011 00:59am
I ask, What do you Think me?, Do you love or hate me? I ask because I think I have fallen in love with you, You say I'm bueatiful and cute, you're so much more good looking than me, honey is it possible to miss you even though we haven't met yet? I think I love you!
13th Jun 2011 3:16pm
