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Worship
He kissed her deep
deep as deep could be
never kiss more deep
her skin combined in ecstasy
each finger nail and eye-lash
all joined in chorus
taut chords to breaking
tuned in concert pitch
no melody to compete
combining all to unison.
Rehearsal times well spent;
so he kissed her deep on deep,
his tears in joy upon her thighs
his head deep in her hands;
so he worshipped kneeling deep,
deep as deep could be.
Published 19th Aug 2015
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19th Aug 2015 5:45pm
I love your take on the submissive man. A man's love is endearing can be a very powerful thing. I can imagine the guy so emotional and crazy about this woman and her taking him and accepting him into herself. So vivid and sweet. I really liked your poem.
Thankyou Decipherme
Lovemaking is a mix of domination and submission to another ,the man must in most instances knee the woman many times initiating the lovemaking.Watch pigeons, the male goes to great length to seek the approval of the female ,accepting with humility her rejections There is a conceit amoungst many that the man is the initiatorr.As you well know that is not the case,nor should he be Thankyou for your comments
Ps . . . I have written a poem on DuP titled 'Opera' inwhich I illustrate this belief
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