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Hide And Seek
I made her a promise
that I could find her
anywhere.
she made me promise
to look for her
everywhere.
but time was killing us.
she died unfound
and I cried because
I lost,
everything.
I made a promise
I could not keep.
I lost what I loved,
I could not hide from the grief.
that I could find her
anywhere.
she made me promise
to look for her
everywhere.
but time was killing us.
she died unfound
and I cried because
I lost,
everything.
I made a promise
I could not keep.
I lost what I loved,
I could not hide from the grief.
Published 15th Aug 2015
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16th Aug 2015 4:42am
Oh how sad! :(
The first stanza sounds so like the promises we make when in love. Always above the stars, and something we can't possibly know we can't reach.
The first stanza sounds so like the promises we make when in love. Always above the stars, and something we can't possibly know we can't reach.
17th Aug 2015 7:41am
Clear write, I enjoyed the topic and the exposed emotion here. Thank you for the write!
