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black silk
Sorrow wraps my heart in sadness, black as silk
my empty screams do not echo
my soul aches with the rain of blood
my headaches flow with the time of day and night
my pain grows with the lies that have been spoken
now....now i'm truely broken
my empty screams do not echo
my soul aches with the rain of blood
my headaches flow with the time of day and night
my pain grows with the lies that have been spoken
now....now i'm truely broken
Published 30th Jun 2015
| Edited 7th Jul 2015
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30th Jun 2015 9:22pm
30th Jun 2015 9:24pm
30th Jun 2015 11:58pm
I really like this. Reminds me of how I feel when I have my migraines. I do commander one thing, to add line breaks and commas, so the reader can take a breath in between reading it.
I sometimes forget to add them myself. :-)
Other wise it is well written and really good imagery.
I sometimes forget to add them myself. :-)
Other wise it is well written and really good imagery.
30th Sep 2015 00:24am
