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Paradise¿
My psyche is loosing it's balance,
Compulsion loosing control,
So you can call it manslaughter..
Subconsciously digging a hole.
In pieces are my old self...
Dismembered it has been..
Torn apart and re sewn,
Just not with the same skin..
Compulsion loosing control,
So you can call it manslaughter..
Subconsciously digging a hole.
In pieces are my old self...
Dismembered it has been..
Torn apart and re sewn,
Just not with the same skin..
Published 19th May 2015
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28th May 2015 00:43am
Very nice, like the symbol used... The narration used is perfect for this type of write, very groovy... The last 2 lines are my favorite me thinks, it made the whole piece go to another level... Take good care friend: deadwolf
