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inside, outside
I dont know what's inside
Unaware of all that's outside
All that's left is the other side
Is it my time?
Fearful of the inside
Detached from the outside
All that's clear is the other side
Stop me this time
Screaming on the inside
Forever silenced outside
Hiding from the other side
Will they find me this time?
Darkness from the inside
Tore apart my outside
Took me to the other side
There's no such thing as time.
Unaware of all that's outside
All that's left is the other side
Is it my time?
Fearful of the inside
Detached from the outside
All that's clear is the other side
Stop me this time
Screaming on the inside
Forever silenced outside
Hiding from the other side
Will they find me this time?
Darkness from the inside
Tore apart my outside
Took me to the other side
There's no such thing as time.
Published 14th Nov 2009
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2009 2:37am
Dark and compelling little poem... And the subject matter really speaks to me. Always great to see a writer tackle such haunting material.
15th Nov 2009 3:57am
I apprieciate the feedback. Glad I created something in my mind that spoke out to someone else.
Anonymous
15th Nov 2009 4:01am
i like how u have played with your words here.honest too.
