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Dawn of The Body Modder
Needles driven
Punched through
Juxtaposed pointillism
Ink saturated wound
Electricity lanced
"Stars and bars"
This is the dawn of the masochists who bear colorful scars
Show me your skin
Canvas clean
Break down, give in
Give it to me
I, artist
Scarification
In the generation of elation through body modification
Flesh tunnel
Large gauge
Implants
All the rage
Parlor shops
Addictions and cures
Oh the things our skin endures
Temporary pain
Instant gratification
New age
Visual stimulation
A sheep in the flock
Mono-tonality
Flash art? At least have some originality
Punched through
Juxtaposed pointillism
Ink saturated wound
Electricity lanced
"Stars and bars"
This is the dawn of the masochists who bear colorful scars
Show me your skin
Canvas clean
Break down, give in
Give it to me
I, artist
Scarification
In the generation of elation through body modification
Flesh tunnel
Large gauge
Implants
All the rage
Parlor shops
Addictions and cures
Oh the things our skin endures
Temporary pain
Instant gratification
New age
Visual stimulation
A sheep in the flock
Mono-tonality
Flash art? At least have some originality
Published 14th Apr 2015
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14th Apr 2015 5:56am
This is a thought provoking poem with some accurate and troubling observations. The structure and word choices complement each other perfectly making for strong point conveyance. I find myself agreeing and familiarly contemplating the depression of how the raw natural state of humans is constantly devalued. Excellent.
14th Apr 2015 4:32pm
Wow, this says everything about today's materialistic world so focused on appearances.
Isn't it funny, I began writing this as a respect to body mods then I got to thinking about society and their "Cinderella" way of life that you have to look a certain way to be accepted into certain communities of people.
I myself am a tattooer and if I can see that A lot people are more concerned about fitting in to a certain "class" instead of the actual artwork and liking something for their own reasons, then it's already out of hand.
If you've ever said "I wana get sleeved up" please do the last bit of us original thinkers a favor and go wrestle a fucking bear.
I myself am a tattooer and if I can see that A lot people are more concerned about fitting in to a certain "class" instead of the actual artwork and liking something for their own reasons, then it's already out of hand.
If you've ever said "I wana get sleeved up" please do the last bit of us original thinkers a favor and go wrestle a fucking bear.
