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my slave heat!
While laying in Your furs, i begin caressing my breast, pinching my nipples. Taunting my slave heat... uhh awe, I reach down spreading my puss apart, Awe yeah... aww fuck its so very wet... Sliding a couple of fingers in deep, as my thumb teases my clit... awe shit yeah... "O'God", uhh awe... Aching for Your touch, arching my back... My moans becomes so very loud, begging uhh, hopa hopaplease come taste of me... I know You want me as much as I want You... So come take of me what You will.. Still caressing my breast, I gently caress down to meet my other hand... Spreading my pussy further apart, as I watch You climb into bed... Your cock hard, I lick my lips... awe, yeah! Come have a taste of me... As You caress up my legs, finding my wet flowing heat.. I slide my fingers out as You begin to feast... As well enjoy my own taste.. Sucking, licking my fingers clean yummm... Awe fuck.. uhh .. As I feel You suckling on my clit, spreading my heat, awe... Sliding Your tongue in deep... Awe yeah... Fuck yeah, grabbing at the sides of the bed... You start fingering me at the same time biting on my swollen clit, awe fuck... shit yeah.. With one hand You reach, firmly grabbing at my breast... awe ouch, pinching, twisting.. Awe yeah, pulling my nipples.. While continuing to eat, finger fucking... Taunting such heat that begins to bubble up out of control, as if it was a volcano bout to explode... fuck yeah... hopa hopaplease, Itancanka... my Master awe, fuck yeah, awe... hopaplease I want to cum please hopaplease! Hearing a muzzled "Yes cum for Me," as You bury Your face in deep... Knees bent, toes curled... Awe, hell yeah... O'my God.... Fuck yeah! My body quivers as my pussy over flows... You drink, slurping, while still tongue fucking my heat... Awe O'God yeah! With one last final bite of the clit, awe fuck yes... You raise with cock in hand, saying "Now I am going to fuck that slave heat of Mine... yess, hopa hopaplease fuck my... naw... Fuck Your slave heat hopaplease Master please!
Published 5th Apr 2015
| Edited 7th Apr 2015
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6th Apr 2015 10:04am
Interesting stream of consciousness but I have to confess I didn't like it. I'm not even sure it's a poem and it's crudity takes away from the eroticism and sensuality.That's my two cents, take it for what it's worth.
7th Apr 2015 4:26pm
am glad you didn't like... I didn't write it thinking everyone would enjoy... And well when it comes to be crude during sex that's not for all neither.. Yet when sex isn't always considered as making love just having down right nasty sex being a bit crude isn't that bad... If I was writing about making love than maybe I would have desired to express it as being a bit more sensual.. No it isn't a poem... That was my mistake, didn't mean to place it in the wrong category, am glad you pointed that out.. Now that its proper place.. I thank you for your two cents...I found the worth... Have enjoyed reading yours and look forward to reading more...
6th Apr 2015 1:53pm
Well it's definitely arousing reliving an experience
isn't it!? lol... wet sticky yummy for all! lol
isn't it!? lol... wet sticky yummy for all! lol
