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~Little Girl~
Little girl.. don't you put a lock on your life..
You have alot more ahead of you.
You drown your sorrows out,
You feel as if you should hide..
Your "escape" isn't booze.
Little girl don't keep everything hidden inside.
There's far more out there than you believe.
Please don't give up, promise me..
You can have fun again,
if you'll only have a sense of pride.
You have alot more ahead of you.
You drown your sorrows out,
You feel as if you should hide..
Your "escape" isn't booze.
Little girl don't keep everything hidden inside.
There's far more out there than you believe.
Please don't give up, promise me..
You can have fun again,
if you'll only have a sense of pride.
Published 31st Mar 2015
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Anonymous
31st Mar 2015 9:14pm
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1st Apr 2015 6:59am
3rd Apr 2015 11:51am
Great write! where were you when I was 17?
Not as poetical as your words, I had a mentor basically say the same message to me. It was the respect for myself and gaining respect words that hit home.
Not as poetical as your words, I had a mentor basically say the same message to me. It was the respect for myself and gaining respect words that hit home.
9th Apr 2015 9:49pm
That depends on how long that is..
In Amsterdam probably.
Your mentor sounds like a good guy though.
Are you okay now?
In Amsterdam probably.
Your mentor sounds like a good guy though.
Are you okay now?
11th Apr 2015 10:37am
Better than ok. The word RESPECT is how I treat myself and what I expect from others.
