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Salty
I hear rumours
Of there being other fish in the ocean.
All iv seen are corpses.
I live in the dead sea.....
Of there being other fish in the ocean.
All iv seen are corpses.
I live in the dead sea.....
Published 24th Mar 2015
| Edited 25th Mar 2015
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25th Mar 2015 8:34am
Interesting turn of words at the end. I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but it is very clever. Nice job!
25th Mar 2015 12:52pm
It was intentional yes. Hence the title and the second last line. Also thanks for reading.
Anonymous
25th Mar 2015 9:13am
Sometimes the sea of life is a dark one indeed...
