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Progressive Entropy of the Soul
The whites
of the eyes are
as dark as night n'
it feels like the spark
just can't ignite
Guess that's how it is
when life's nemesis
is assuredly death...
yet beyond,
eyes suspect
that one wonders...
What's really next?
of the eyes are
as dark as night n'
it feels like the spark
just can't ignite
Guess that's how it is
when life's nemesis
is assuredly death...
yet beyond,
eyes suspect
that one wonders...
What's really next?
Published 22nd Mar 2015
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22nd Mar 2015 7:05pm
Oh, this amazing, Poe. Love it because of its depth and beauty and have to add it to my reading list. x
23rd Mar 2015 1:54pm
I'm honored n flattered you added it to your list
my dear lady...truly thank you much for your continued support! :)
my dear lady...truly thank you much for your continued support! :)
22nd Mar 2015 11:51pm
23rd Mar 2015 1:55pm
Aaawww I've intrigued you huh? Yay! lol
Thank you sweetie pie, appreciate you mucho! :)
Thank you sweetie pie, appreciate you mucho! :)
23rd Mar 2015 10:48am
23rd Mar 2015 1:56pm
Yup, well NOT much in a hurry of course lol
But yea makes one wonder don't it? :) thanks much bro.
But yea makes one wonder don't it? :) thanks much bro.
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Apr 2015 5:18pm
2nd Apr 2015 5:17pm
There's always that extra sense just creeps in at the corner of the eye which tells us how things really are.
I have so much to catch up on my readings of your work pikm, this is written so exceptionally well, in a concise and yet powerful way.
I have so much to catch up on my readings of your work pikm, this is written so exceptionally well, in a concise and yet powerful way.
2nd Apr 2015 9:58pm
Aaaawww my sweet lady, u have been missed but truly n always appreciate u :)
Anonymous
17th Apr 2015 2:52pm
The mystery of life after death captured most excellently in these lines. Great job! I must say I can't get enough of your ink!
17th Apr 2015 4:05pm
Aaaaawwww!! *blushing wildly* so honored by your words
N support...I thank u greatly :)
N support...I thank u greatly :)
