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goodbye, goodbye
Goodbye, goodbye
The wind has died
I can't breathe no more
Goodbye, goodbye
Moving on in life
Is an innocent death
Taken to the grave
the words goodbye, goodbye
Will they be saved
The words goodbye, goodbye
goodbye, goodbye
The sun has died
the rain means no harm
Goodbye, goodbye
Living the other side
won't be lost
The wind has died
I can't breathe no more
Goodbye, goodbye
Moving on in life
Is an innocent death
Taken to the grave
the words goodbye, goodbye
Will they be saved
The words goodbye, goodbye
goodbye, goodbye
The sun has died
the rain means no harm
Goodbye, goodbye
Living the other side
won't be lost
Published 19th Mar 2015
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19th Mar 2015 7:58am
Thanks for writing this. My brother, close friend, has terminal cancer, and the time may be short. I'm dreading the final day, and I'm numb with pain/sorrow. The spirit of this poem may help...
19th Mar 2015 11:58am
I like the lines 'Moving on in life/is an innocent death' because that is so true. As you move on in life you lose who you used to be. Your childhood dies, your teen years die, etc. It is an innocent death but a death nonetheless. Well done!
