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Dawn Comes After Death
Crimson trails
Carved down my heart,
the pain has faded
my life can start
A muffled thud
I hit the floor
My breath is still
Forever more
The chains are gone
That held me back
My life is slipping
Through the cracks
A darkened pit
That lulls me in
Like a pleasant dream
About to begin
My time is done
And now I'm gone,
But with it comes
A brighter dawn.
Carved down my heart,
the pain has faded
my life can start
A muffled thud
I hit the floor
My breath is still
Forever more
The chains are gone
That held me back
My life is slipping
Through the cracks
A darkened pit
That lulls me in
Like a pleasant dream
About to begin
My time is done
And now I'm gone,
But with it comes
A brighter dawn.
Published 14th May 2011
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14th May 2011 10:11pm
I enjoyed reading your poem TearlessHatter, would you mind if I wrote it down in my notebook ?
14th May 2011 10:34pm
