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Odd Little Limerick
The story of Tommy and Lisa's defined:
he had just taken acid, she raised her behind
"I'll hide your salami"
she hinted to Tommy
but by then he was fucked, and out of his mind
he had just taken acid, she raised her behind
"I'll hide your salami"
she hinted to Tommy
but by then he was fucked, and out of his mind
Published 15th Feb 2015
| Edited 16th Feb 2015
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15th Feb 2015 8:15am
15th Feb 2015 2:35pm
thanks guys, yeah I loved kinder tale but oddly enough this limerick just popped into my head at like 2 in the morning and I thought it was amusing. ps made a little edit to fit the rhythm, does it help?
