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discarded figurine
tears trickle
down pallid
skin as dusk
disrobes me
in pygmalion's
wake
unadorned
as luna without sol -
doomed
like shadow denied
light
i am
darkness
must i
relump
becoming
milky ivory -
galatea
entombed
as before
her fickle
sculpting
or
dare i
smash the porcelain
forever redeem
this
chipped trinket
scorned
down pallid
skin as dusk
disrobes me
in pygmalion's
wake
unadorned
as luna without sol -
doomed
like shadow denied
light
i am
darkness
must i
relump
becoming
milky ivory -
galatea
entombed
as before
her fickle
sculpting
or
dare i
smash the porcelain
forever redeem
this
chipped trinket
scorned
Published 22nd Jan 2015
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22nd Jan 2015 10:33pm
22nd Jan 2015 10:40pm
Anonymous
24th Jan 2015 7:46pm
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24th Jan 2015 9:05pm
25th Jan 2015 3:36pm
I like the why you presented a question with the last two stanzas. You also used a word "relump" that I don't see often.
Excellent color given to your descriptive words.
Excellent color given to your descriptive words.
25th Jan 2015 7:30pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2015 7:38pm
you smash the porcelain! i quite enjoyed this.
