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My black soul hurts with no light;
a solid bell hangs from the top of my heart. No noise.
I spread my soul on paper spread it thin and wide covering the sheet, no light shows, black covers the page.
I hurt without noise suffering silently for just now. I hope something will come in, a spec or grain of light; I know I do not want too much just a bit to feel some hope.
a solid bell hangs from the top of my heart. No noise.
I spread my soul on paper spread it thin and wide covering the sheet, no light shows, black covers the page.
I hurt without noise suffering silently for just now. I hope something will come in, a spec or grain of light; I know I do not want too much just a bit to feel some hope.
Published 30th Apr 2011
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30th Apr 2011 5:34pm
1st May 2011 3:45pm
i liked this poem . you seem very talented, are you going to add more to this poem? if you make it longer you might think of a good title for it. anyways i mainly just wanted to tell you your a good poet i hope you write many more poems. welcome to this site i hope it treats you well. have a good day :)
