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Kingdom Came
"EXTRAPOLATE!"
the godded paint can sang breezy
"A-lack-a-daze thy pithy dreevs and total
holy frumblings"
& so the mottled snore
& the queer-eyed crow cocked true
& smoke stumbling sleepily among sun-stained shoulders...
the godded paint can sang breezy
"A-lack-a-daze thy pithy dreevs and total
holy frumblings"
& so the mottled snore
& the queer-eyed crow cocked true
& smoke stumbling sleepily among sun-stained shoulders...
Published 12th Dec 2014
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12th Dec 2014 2:55am
i love the strange imagery and alliteration in the last two lines.
I think I may have pithy dreevs and some frumblings somewhere around here.
I think I may have pithy dreevs and some frumblings somewhere around here.
12th Dec 2014 3:14am
thank you, I like your Red Chair in the Green Garden; I can't put my finger on what exactly I like about it though, and that is making me like it even more.
3rd Mar 2015 3:02am
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6th Jan 2015 3:57pm
I can't stop smiling at this.
Don't ever thin the paint. Let it run. :D
Don't ever thin the paint. Let it run. :D
