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you
you promised to love me
and i believed you
now my heart is broken
and i feel like a fool
i wanted to be with you forever
but that wasnt your plan
you left me cold and alone
after you pulled my soul out with your hand
now i walk alone
in this loveless world
you were my everything
and now i have lost my one and only girl
and i believed you
now my heart is broken
and i feel like a fool
i wanted to be with you forever
but that wasnt your plan
you left me cold and alone
after you pulled my soul out with your hand
now i walk alone
in this loveless world
you were my everything
and now i have lost my one and only girl
Published 28th Apr 2011
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29th Apr 2011 4:35am
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3rd May 2011 7:00pm
That was written with talent! I already knew were were very poetic but this shows your true colors!
11th Jul 2011 6:56am
1.) Why the fuck is the first comment titled 'xD' as if this was funny? :l
2.) Well written, Chey c:
2.) Well written, Chey c:
