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deepdeepdee
p
ression dee
p
ress [me]dee
p
ever
y happyslappy
sadhappy da
y
me'lancholia
mel canola[y]
mala Canoli(a)
[ d'rip FatCreme ]y'Um//
deepdee
p
res
sio
n hide deep (hideep)Und'err
grind
un de rgr I n d
u n g round y
Undergrounded
dee p under
grind'ing
GroundUnder
deepdeepd
eepres'ion / eat me eat
corpocapsKapitale[s]
of trillllllllllllion dollah
billionLoves / thee
swallowers ret'urn
fo'they's capsule'anos just
as reg'lr as thee springtime /
the
shark corpse
that washed up'a'shore yes
ter
eve
didnot lookwell at'all....rather beaten.....
p'haps may be even
deep
ress
'd
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dkzk2o14\FOTOriginale:"HiyaCharlie/HiyaDoon?"BYdkzk
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Published 24th Nov 2014
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24th Nov 2014 11:02pm
yet never seen someone who would able to be as jolly in depression as thee, sir
(dont mean particularry this write)..
(dont mean particularry this write)..
25th Nov 2014 2:55am
ye gotta cultivate ability to Not 'take-it-personally'.....laugh at how one's ego
silly cling to it as
some kind of
reality.
maybe I'm wrong, but, so what?
only i tried to associate this write with your different states of mind... may be my projections are dull, so pardon, i would be so pleased to understand more in your rare da-syntax..
there is only every 5th poem of you i believe i manage to translate for my little brain..so pity..
on your new portrait your look resembles of ezra pound
there is only every 5th poem of you i believe i manage to translate for my little brain..so pity..
on your new portrait your look resembles of ezra pound
25th Nov 2014 6:50pm
you're doing better than me.
my weebitty brain has no idear what 99.621% of 'my poems is saying, so
I just can't bother with such trifles, lest I 'hurt myself', perhaps even 'mortally'...Ha
27th Nov 2014 00:56am
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