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You're my antidote c:
This life is a never ending maze - one that leads you to its core of solitude and darkness - led to something that you believe to be sweet and tender - but its a poison ivy taking on the appearance of a rose - a sweet but deadly paradox unearthed,
However as the leaves turn icy and bitter, i would imagine my heart to imitate and fade into darkened territory,
But, my paradise, my love and my nirvana walks this earth and so my heart turns from stone to caramel,
His voice and the sight of his sweet face bring me back to happiness - he is the light in the dark and my everlasting love, you're my whole world, and with you i can fight battles because you're my shield, and i love you so much c:
However as the leaves turn icy and bitter, i would imagine my heart to imitate and fade into darkened territory,
But, my paradise, my love and my nirvana walks this earth and so my heart turns from stone to caramel,
His voice and the sight of his sweet face bring me back to happiness - he is the light in the dark and my everlasting love, you're my whole world, and with you i can fight battles because you're my shield, and i love you so much c:
Published 10th Nov 2014
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10th Nov 2014 4:32pm
I loved the read. You know both sides and are the wiser to use love as the antidote. "my nirvana walks this earth" just awesome. :)
10th Nov 2014 5:03pm
Awwwwww :') thank you so much for your lovely comment :') so nice of you to stop by , thank you , hope you have a wonderful day c:
10th Nov 2014 4:35pm
I Like that Love in the dark stuff!!!
Awesome write sweets!!
Had too read this Gr8 ink twice!!!
Outstanding job!!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write sweets!!
Had too read this Gr8 ink twice!!!
Outstanding job!!!
Sir Lancelott
10th Nov 2014 5:04pm
Wow o: thank you so much hehe , awww :') that means a lot c: hope you have a great day c:
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17th Nov 2014 6:22pm
Dark and beautiful
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12th Dec 2014 11:30pm
I love the idea of a person being an antidote - could go either way - great write
:-)
12th Dec 2014 11:36pm
Thank youuuuu c: i appreciate you dropping by and leaving a comment c: hope you have a great day c:
I was really absorbed by the read of such a passionate and tender poem. So many wonderful phrases and metaphors! Love it!
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