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how to make a pigeon cross on the 8:15 to London Bridge...
there was a pigeon in the carriage, so
I opened the window, hoping it
would fly out...
but as the wind blew in, all I
succeeded in doing was to ruffle
a few feathers...
Published 4th Nov 2014
| Edited 5th Nov 2014
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4th Nov 2014 5:11am
4th Nov 2014 6:12pm
thanks, the train was actually
heading past the bridge to
Charing Cross, but how many
crosses can you have in a title..;)
heading past the bridge to
Charing Cross, but how many
crosses can you have in a title..;)
4th Nov 2014 8:29am
Pigeons are so lazy nowadays. I hope he made it to the bridge in time for his workday. Love the story here.
4th Nov 2014 6:14pm
think he thought he was slumming it,
having to share a carriage with the
llikes of me...
having to share a carriage with the
llikes of me...
4th Nov 2014 12:05pm
Those things crap wherever they please, usually over my car and over my son while he is in school.
Good on you Paul lol.
Also, a great piece and visual :)
Good on you Paul lol.
Also, a great piece and visual :)
4th Nov 2014 6:17pm
thanks, Magdalena, they're
one of my many phobias,
which is a bit unfortunate as
there are so many of 'em..:)
one of my many phobias,
which is a bit unfortunate as
there are so many of 'em..:)
5th Nov 2014 6:58am
Knowing that you dislike pigeons
it must have been an unpleasant ride
for both of you.
All the more because the birdy must have
appeared even bigger with a
fluffed up plumage.
it must have been an unpleasant ride
for both of you.
All the more because the birdy must have
appeared even bigger with a
fluffed up plumage.
6th Nov 2014 6:49am
6th Nov 2014 11:07pm
