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Star
he said nothing
gave no reason
left no note
went nowhere
but Springmaid pier
where he hung himself
and for one day
he was a star
gave no reason
left no note
went nowhere
but Springmaid pier
where he hung himself
and for one day
he was a star
Published 22nd Oct 2014
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2014 1:23pm
That was a surpising end, good flow of words, enjoyed the read....
22nd Oct 2014 3:10pm
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2014 1:02am
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This is good, but brings up very painful emotions for me. At least you know it invokes something in others which is obviously a good thing for a writer. You always have some shock value for sure...
Stark ending, enjoyed...
Stark ending, enjoyed...
23rd Oct 2014 7:09pm
Thank you Sansaint and Fenom. A childhood memory no child needs to witness.
