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my forever
you seem to think I'll simply walk away
because you're afraid of hurting me
I understand how you feel;
your concerns are valid
but I'm not going anywhere
I will travel with you
to whatever end
we will mend or go down together
for no matter what happens;
no matter what you think
will save me from the pain
nothing will change the fact
I'm still going to love you
and that the inside of your heart
will always be
my forever
-yekaterina
because you're afraid of hurting me
I understand how you feel;
your concerns are valid
but I'm not going anywhere
I will travel with you
to whatever end
we will mend or go down together
for no matter what happens;
no matter what you think
will save me from the pain
nothing will change the fact
I'm still going to love you
and that the inside of your heart
will always be
my forever
-yekaterina
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 2nd Oct 2014
| Edited 23rd Oct 2014
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Re: my forever
2nd Oct 2014 2:27pm
someone loves me from a distance and would never let me go, at some point I would make up my mind, make it right, and return to him, such love seems haunting but it is as rare as a wine red sea, this is what your poem makes me feel
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re: Re: my forever
15th Oct 2014 8:59pm
Your comment is well received and I've accomplished my goal with this poem to the letter as I see it.
Thanks for your kind words and visit, absinthe...
Thanks for your kind words and visit, absinthe...
Re: my forever
2nd Oct 2014 11:21pm
well there's nothing I could say
that would be half as thoughtful
or beautiful as absinthe's comment,
so I'll just add that I like it..:)
that would be half as thoughtful
or beautiful as absinthe's comment,
so I'll just add that I like it..:)
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re: Re: my forever
15th Oct 2014 8:59pm
Re: my forever
3rd Oct 2014 5:11am
By the Gods, I think you melted the Reaperīs heart, and heīs crying somewhere in a dark crevice.
Utterly Utterly Perfect!!
Darker
Utterly Utterly Perfect!!
Darker
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re: Re: my forever
15th Oct 2014 9:01pm
That's one hell of a comment, Steph... thanks so much for the visit and kind words...
Re: my forever
8th Oct 2014 7:53pm
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15th Oct 2014 9:02pm
Re: my forever
Anonymous
15th Oct 2014 9:51pm
Very dark. Nice!
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re: Re: my forever
16th Oct 2014 4:10am
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15th Oct 2014 11:41pm
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Re: my forever
17th Oct 2014 3:52pm
This is nice! Love is in the air Nd When I hear it my brain thinks Batman is saying it all super buff with his cape* on and the wind blowing .. lol you have a powerful voice use it wisely ;-)
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re: Re: my forever
17th Oct 2014 6:27pm
Re: my forever
18th Oct 2014 7:21am
a road less travelled, the reason being it is paved only w/great sacrifice. sincere & gallant...
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