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i sit here looking up at the stars but they arent shining down on me
they laugh and tease about my density, i am not bright
i cannot twinkle at their height, i am far down on the cold hard earth
warming my self with a heart given at birth
they laugh and tease about my density, i am not bright
i cannot twinkle at their height, i am far down on the cold hard earth
warming my self with a heart given at birth
Published 29th Sep 2014
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The personification of the stars intrigued me, giving them human qualities such as them laughing and tensing. normally the stars are seen as something beautiful yet they seem spiteful within your poem. Nice work & thanks for sharing :)
