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'like a sore thumb...'
we need to work this
out, says she, as though my love
were but a splinter...
out, says she, as though my love
were but a splinter...
Published 17th Sep 2014
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17th Sep 2014 12:30pm
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17th Sep 2014 7:46pm
Ouch ... that wasn't nice :-(. Better a splinter in the thumb than in the eye ...
17th Sep 2014 10:28pm
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17th Sep 2014 10:08pm
Excellent metaphor. Perfect use of figurative language. Check my poems out would you?
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