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love on the razors edge
what have you taken away?
a cload of chaos?
as emotions twist.
once we tasted heaven,
innocent and childlike.
but your love perished.
a hateful vision of bitterness- tears follow hate, follow bitterness.
love burnt to ashes,
in a haze of hatred.
i still love you.
a cload of chaos?
as emotions twist.
once we tasted heaven,
innocent and childlike.
but your love perished.
a hateful vision of bitterness- tears follow hate, follow bitterness.
love burnt to ashes,
in a haze of hatred.
i still love you.
Published 12th Apr 2011
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12th Apr 2011 8:06pm
Please tell me i didnt inspire this poem,and mean it. It's good babe and i loves ya too
13th Apr 2011 3:44am
14th Apr 2011 1:18pm
its about how love can be on the razors edge you know like ups and downs but no matter what they have done to you you still feel some love
