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Heart Eater
Heart eater.
Skeletal sliming, starving.
Bone jaw gaping,
Devour the cockroach that crawls out
From the crack in my soul.
Disturbing insight,
Dungeonous light
Dimly shining upon my infested entrails,
Quivering in a cold kind of agony.
(yes, there's a couple made up words in there)
Skeletal sliming, starving.
Bone jaw gaping,
Devour the cockroach that crawls out
From the crack in my soul.
Disturbing insight,
Dungeonous light
Dimly shining upon my infested entrails,
Quivering in a cold kind of agony.
(yes, there's a couple made up words in there)
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 3:59am
Hmm, an interesting peek into your darker side. Once again, imagery so vivid I can see and hear and smell your words, even when my senses kinda wish they couldn't. But still I want to read more... jj
3rd Sep 2014 4:02am
Most of my writing is incredibly dark or wrenching in one way or another... the first two you read are a couple of exceptions, but I do have a descriptive style throughout.
3rd Sep 2014 7:46am
I'd actually like to see more added to this - it seems unfinished, but what is here is eerily good.
