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Light and Dark
I saw the good in her.
Sweet, gentle, kind,
Playful.
But something was not right.
A half-smile that said,
"If he only knew."
The inconsistencies grew,
And a shadow fell.
Her shine...tarnished.
And she grew darker and blacker
in my mind.
No way for her to bring back the light.
So there she remains, bound in darkness.
Sweet, gentle, kind,
Playful.
But something was not right.
A half-smile that said,
"If he only knew."
The inconsistencies grew,
And a shadow fell.
Her shine...tarnished.
And she grew darker and blacker
in my mind.
No way for her to bring back the light.
So there she remains, bound in darkness.
Published 28th Aug 2014
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29th Aug 2014 1:44am
29th Aug 2014 6:53am
29th Aug 2014 1:48pm
Good write ifsheonlyknew....
I know poetry is left open to interpretation so hope you're ok with mine...
Sounds as though someone was put on a pedestal & fell from grace....and forgiveness not forthcoming... :)
I know poetry is left open to interpretation so hope you're ok with mine...
Sounds as though someone was put on a pedestal & fell from grace....and forgiveness not forthcoming... :)
29th Aug 2014 3:11pm
4th Sep 2014 9:11pm
so many secrets that make the fantasy fade. the intrigue here is well designed...
5th Sep 2014 11:53am
