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Misery
As my Time here grows short I want to say some things
The pictures I take are how I see things effects are done at the time the picture is taken
There are no changes made to the original picture.
The posts are real I have lived them and continue to
But as I said time is short
I thank everyone for the input and I thank those who critiqued these.
The pictures I take are how I see things effects are done at the time the picture is taken
There are no changes made to the original picture.
The posts are real I have lived them and continue to
But as I said time is short
I thank everyone for the input and I thank those who critiqued these.
Published 27th Aug 2014
| Edited 19th Sep 2014
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27th Aug 2014 5:42pm
A fledgeling tore your soul?
Try to think of a better way to say soul, heart, moment - repeating the same word when it's not done for deliberate emphasis feels boring.
Try to think of a better way to say soul, heart, moment - repeating the same word when it's not done for deliberate emphasis feels boring.
27th Aug 2014 5:44pm
29th Aug 2014 2:44pm
