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the drowning doom (extract from Brutal Ledgend)

through the woods a girl came sadly, 
something beating in her chest. 
she had dared to love another , 
alas no better than the rest. 
 
so up my path the girl came glady, 
something opened up my doors. 
so i longed to stop her bleeding heart, 
i called her to my shores. 
 
those you trust will hurt you badly, 
something now im sure you'll see. 
so drown your tears in me my dear, 
as you drown my dear in me.

(full credit to Brutal Ledgend.)
Written by 666gothchick (Paulina Dionne)
Published | Edited 9th Apr 2012
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