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real love
Love is like a blanket.
If it is securely and faithfully wrapped around you,
It warms you, and comforts you.
Real love is protecting- safe.
But, if it is uncertain, and not lively,
and only shakily draped across you,
All it does is trap the cold inside,
And allows doubts and lies to intrude,
Fake love destroys your foundation
If it is securely and faithfully wrapped around you,
It warms you, and comforts you.
Real love is protecting- safe.
But, if it is uncertain, and not lively,
and only shakily draped across you,
All it does is trap the cold inside,
And allows doubts and lies to intrude,
Fake love destroys your foundation
Published 10th Apr 2011
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10th Apr 2011 7:42am
again i cried,my grandmother came in and saw me crying :/ but its really good,thank you so much
11th Apr 2011 10:11pm
Anonymous
30th Aug 2011 8:50pm
[All it does is trap the cold inside,
And allows doubts and lies to intrude,
Fake love destroys your foundation ]
And allows doubts and lies to intrude,
Fake love destroys your foundation ]
