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Remembering
Remembering his love -- for me
That look in his eyes, the way
his voice trembled -- for me
Remembering the way he
would -- take me
How his lips moved along
my skin -- often
Remembering his passion -- for me
taking my fear with just a touch
Remembering those sensual
nights -- with him
And how those bright mornings
we laid -- in pleasure
That look in his eyes, the way
his voice trembled -- for me
Remembering the way he
would -- take me
How his lips moved along
my skin -- often
Remembering his passion -- for me
taking my fear with just a touch
Remembering those sensual
nights -- with him
And how those bright mornings
we laid -- in pleasure
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Re: Remembering
Anonymous
18th Aug 2014 10:26pm
Kant nevr forget dis won
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20th Aug 2014 8:55am
What a great memory Tommie Girl...exactly how I remember it!!! LOL!!! Enjoy your writing and I like this one...Please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2014 2:06pm
Great... interesting line control, the way there's a repetition of a breaking pattern.
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13th Sep 2014 1:18pm
Waking to sweet bliss is supreme ... You've penned that wonderfully here.
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11th Dec 2014 7:33pm
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2014 4:45pm
Beautiful write.. you're a gifted writer..
Dave
Dave
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11th Dec 2014 7:33pm
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11th Jan 2015 8:28am
Love this poem. It reminds me of my first love. Passion, heat and not only in the bedroom.
Cheers!
Cheers!
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