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Hell Her New Home
Life flashing before her
As she falls to the floor
The windows to her soul
Painted over with gloom
Nothing but stillness
As silence befalls her
Deaths cold beady glare
Now her only real threat
As it seizes her last breath
All time ceasing to exist
In this new home she lay rest
Filled with screams of the damned
And the tears of the unheard
Subjected to everlasting distress
In this pit of rotting flesh
…Welcome to hell…
As she falls to the floor
The windows to her soul
Painted over with gloom
Nothing but stillness
As silence befalls her
Deaths cold beady glare
Now her only real threat
As it seizes her last breath
All time ceasing to exist
In this new home she lay rest
Filled with screams of the damned
And the tears of the unheard
Subjected to everlasting distress
In this pit of rotting flesh
…Welcome to hell…
Published 3rd Aug 2014
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3rd Aug 2014 11:39am
Hello MoonlightSonata; how are you... This is a great dark write my friend, your characters last moments before claimed by death, very real like, can feel the total despair, even anxiety take ahold... The brutal self realization of her final judgment, timeless hell, abandoned, and alone in the dark, very well done my friend: deadwolf
4th Aug 2014 6:48am
