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Make Me....
Hold me...
Let your hands, brace my flesh...
Kiss me...
Let your lips, twist into my dreams...
Tease me...
Make my body, wrap into your world...
Want me...
Cause my mind, to loose it's sanity...
Free me...
Show me, how to come alive with your finger tips...
Consume me...
Take my breathe, with your delicious taste...
Overpower me...
Make me become lost in your gaze...
Seduce me...
Move within me until I tremble within your love...
By:RFuller 8/2/14
Let your hands, brace my flesh...
Kiss me...
Let your lips, twist into my dreams...
Tease me...
Make my body, wrap into your world...
Want me...
Cause my mind, to loose it's sanity...
Free me...
Show me, how to come alive with your finger tips...
Consume me...
Take my breathe, with your delicious taste...
Overpower me...
Make me become lost in your gaze...
Seduce me...
Move within me until I tremble within your love...
By:RFuller 8/2/14
Published 3rd Aug 2014
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3rd Aug 2014 3:27am
Make you...
Tell me when, so you can tremble within!!LOL!
Great write sweets!!
A so beautifully giving read!!
Thanxx for sharing!
Sir Lancelott
Tell me when, so you can tremble within!!LOL!
Great write sweets!!
A so beautifully giving read!!
Thanxx for sharing!
Sir Lancelott
3rd Aug 2014 3:29am
Lol... Oh you devil haha thank you lance, you always make me happy to write again... :)
3rd Aug 2014 11:31pm
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4th Aug 2014 7:29am
C'mon blueeyes..."make me" tell you why I liked this poem...I liked it for its emotion, for the message and for the imagery...these all combined to help "make me" like this one...please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
4th Aug 2014 6:28pm
5th Aug 2014 3:03am
this was Awesome!!
love this line:
"Show me, how to come alive with your finger tips"
very sexy,really like how it plays into the title..enjoyed!!!
love this line:
"Show me, how to come alive with your finger tips"
very sexy,really like how it plays into the title..enjoyed!!!
5th Aug 2014 7:40am
5th Aug 2014 11:06pm
Let someone else take charge for a change. Be submissive and coy. I like that game to. Enjoyed.
5th Aug 2014 11:19pm
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 6:53pm
Sensual! Nice work!
11th Aug 2014 9:11pm
