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No Fool
A beauty similar but not alike
A rose in a field of lilies
An air of uniqueness flows around you
A jewel of immaculate power and prowess
That shines and entices bending resolutions
Even from the strongest of men
A gift from the God’s
With luscious lips and swaying hips to
Speak of the ferocity of your womanhood
I bow in homage and appreciation
I worship your powers
Your acknowledgements intrigue me
I feel unworthy of your gifts
I am just a man but
I am no fool to rebuff
These most precious gifts
Diamonds like these
I will not discard
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
A rose in a field of lilies
An air of uniqueness flows around you
A jewel of immaculate power and prowess
That shines and entices bending resolutions
Even from the strongest of men
A gift from the God’s
With luscious lips and swaying hips to
Speak of the ferocity of your womanhood
I bow in homage and appreciation
I worship your powers
Your acknowledgements intrigue me
I feel unworthy of your gifts
I am just a man but
I am no fool to rebuff
These most precious gifts
Diamonds like these
I will not discard
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 1st Aug 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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2nd Aug 2014 7:23pm
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2nd Aug 2014 7:24pm
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2014 1:30am
I am actually speechless how this made my heart race. Just beautiful lines in this piece. Enjoyed! RL for me. Xo :)
2nd Aug 2014 7:26pm
Anonymous
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3rd Aug 2014 8:09pm
Yes it's a magical time indeed. Thank you Lily for your beautiful comments. Always a pleasure when you stop by.
2nd Aug 2014 4:06am
I love these words of passion and deep emotion this is what I thought love is
"I bow in homage and appreciation
I worship your powers
Your acknowledgements intrigue me
I feel unworthy of your gifts
I am just a man but
I am no fool to rebuff
These most precious gifts"
Is this love for a man or only a women?
Anyway I like to beleive that this women is your heart, and that is love you put into this emotion I think I read in this beautiful poem.
Your heart is beautiful and the passion you hold is deep. She is an amazing women to have you this way.
"I bow in homage and appreciation
I worship your powers
Your acknowledgements intrigue me
I feel unworthy of your gifts
I am just a man but
I am no fool to rebuff
These most precious gifts"
Is this love for a man or only a women?
Anyway I like to beleive that this women is your heart, and that is love you put into this emotion I think I read in this beautiful poem.
Your heart is beautiful and the passion you hold is deep. She is an amazing women to have you this way.
2nd Aug 2014 7:27pm
Men feel tis way as well. We (some of us) just don't articulate it very well. Thank you seascape for your wondeful comments.
2nd Aug 2014 5:20am
My dear friend X no mere words can begin to explain how beautiful this is. Very lucky woman to have u feel that way about her. We all dream of finding a connection like this
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
2nd Aug 2014 7:33pm
I am glad you ejoyed it. It's easy to write when you speak from the heart. I appreciate your words, Belle. Truly.
2nd Aug 2014 8:04pm
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2014 11:23am
Beautiful homage of adoration....
3rd Aug 2014 8:11pm
Adoration and humility of gifts thought to be undeserved. Thank you Mourganna for stopping in.
5th Aug 2014 8:40pm
5th Aug 2014 8:49pm
Do not look a gift horse in the mouth. Glad you enjoyed it Sara. Stop by any time.
