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In My Head (Pt. 2)
I want that beating, I want to feel dominated. Let me fear for my life. Make me scared of losing you. Let me remember my place. Hit this smug look off my face. I am only a girl after all, come on teach me not to be such a fool. Hit me, stab me, shoot me, grab me. Wrap those hands around my throat. Remind me what it feels like to choke.
I need that rush, let my blood gush. Just wrap those hands around my throat. Remind me what it’s like to choke.
I need that rush, let my blood gush. Just wrap those hands around my throat. Remind me what it’s like to choke.
Published 29th Jul 2014
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29th Jul 2014 3:16pm
Nasty, semi-erotic.. (in my opinion at least), very harsh aswell, admire the honesty.
The desire for the "rush" is something I could relate to, in bizarrely similar ways.
Powerful piece of writing, natural too.. pretty uncompromising.
"hit me, stab me, shoot me, grab me. wrap those hands around me throat" Nice flow with that, pretty urgent.
Good write
Be Happy
The desire for the "rush" is something I could relate to, in bizarrely similar ways.
Powerful piece of writing, natural too.. pretty uncompromising.
"hit me, stab me, shoot me, grab me. wrap those hands around me throat" Nice flow with that, pretty urgent.
Good write
Be Happy
