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Deviant
Deviant:
There was once a sexual deviant
She hid herself very well
You would have no idea
She was kinky
Her mind was that of an artist
Usually only her muse
Got to see her depths of desire
Holding back what she destroyed with her fire
I am not talking pottery
Though she dabbled with that to
I mean, she could destroy you
My body burns with my mind
For the roughest, Hottest,
Dirtiest, softest, sweetest
Passionate inspiration
Not many, can keep up with me
Piece of art work here and there
Was a drawing, its childish yes?
But with the innocents, came the rush
The moment of magnetic energies
Lust was a moment her body blushed
He did it, he was able to keep up
It was a fight and fuck, a dance of love
A burn me now, and I will set you on fire
Blazing flames hotter, higher and hotter
The only release that
Simmered the hell fire
To a flame back into desire
Was the moment of combustion?
Together they produced water
seascape
There was once a sexual deviant
She hid herself very well
You would have no idea
She was kinky
Her mind was that of an artist
Usually only her muse
Got to see her depths of desire
Holding back what she destroyed with her fire
I am not talking pottery
Though she dabbled with that to
I mean, she could destroy you
My body burns with my mind
For the roughest, Hottest,
Dirtiest, softest, sweetest
Passionate inspiration
Not many, can keep up with me
Piece of art work here and there
Was a drawing, its childish yes?
But with the innocents, came the rush
The moment of magnetic energies
Lust was a moment her body blushed
He did it, he was able to keep up
It was a fight and fuck, a dance of love
A burn me now, and I will set you on fire
Blazing flames hotter, higher and hotter
The only release that
Simmered the hell fire
To a flame back into desire
Was the moment of combustion?
Together they produced water
seascape
Published 27th Jul 2014
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27th Jul 2014 9:34pm
Reminds of ancient mythology---like a goddess from Mercury or the Sun. There is a bit of phrasing which confuses me;
"I mean, she could destroy you
My body burns with my mind"
with the lack of quotations used the jump from 1st person to 3rd person mixes things up a bit there
"I mean, she could destroy you
My body burns with my mind"
with the lack of quotations used the jump from 1st person to 3rd person mixes things up a bit there
28th Jul 2014 00:09am
28th Jul 2014 1:43am
this is one of those things that for someone like me, would be easier if we had a hardcopy in front of us (some teacher habits of mine haven't been modernized)
Is "My body burns with my mind" , referring to the person dealing with the fire or the woman who possess it?
Is "My body burns with my mind" , referring to the person dealing with the fire or the woman who possess it?
28th Jul 2014 4:11am
28th Jul 2014 9:26am
